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Another update page
This page will be revamped later, I'm just still not happy with that first pannel. But I figure I've had it on my computer for long enough and I'm already moving on to being almost done with the next one so I went ahead an put it up.

Next page has a lot of Dialogue between these two that is almost completely different than the page it will be replacing. Let you know a bit more about Ruric (the leopard)

Any comments and or critique is welcomed.

Things I already know I need to fix
misspelled "familiar"
wing/tail anatomy/coloration
blur out the camp behind the owl in the first pannel
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SarafinaWolf55 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
I Love this!
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shsl-norway Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think it is so good that it should be filmed!
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Raven-Bones Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that leopard looks so awesome!
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paint-the-sky-teal Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
The level of effort and art you put in this amazes me, great job :clap:
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Fellein Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Fft, I just cannot get over your artstyle; something about it just makes me instantly love it. The backgrounds are amazing as well, but if I may say something is that the stars look a bit blotchy at some parts, but that really doesn't matter so much in comparision to the rest of the page!

I also like the re-make of this page; it seems more flowing than the last version, I also like the new pose of the canine (sorry I don't know his name). All in all this is fantastic work, I hope to see more soon!
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TheMadDog Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
The detail you put into these pages are absolutely spectacular Dawn ^^ I look forward to seeing these so much!
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sAMMIDAwOLF Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
Not sure if anyone has pointed it out but you spelled "familiar" wrong. ^_^
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sAMMIDAwOLF Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
**Familar whoa.
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sAMMIDAwOLF Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
Ugh. It's spelled "Familiar". Sorry about that. I had an odd moment just now.
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Carolina22 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow amazing!
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Lunafox123 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
nice! i love it! :hug].
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MalinaIthil Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
gorgouse!!
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L-Young Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Professional General Artist
absolutely LOVE that coyote's face!!! ^_^ man you are getting so good with your backgrounds as well, I es jealous -_- lol, I really don't see anything that looks off or catches my eye. Great job on this!!!
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VexVamp Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really great, I like that you toned down the paiting on Ruric, it looks better suited to a comic now. I would consider making the animals in the distance smaller (along with the blurring you were talking about) they look a little too close to the sky, while the trees still seem a good distance away. Just a thought.
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luckyfluke Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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ur owl is so cool.
period.
i dunno why but when people draw owls and they look good, it really makes my day cause they look so epic but so serene....
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Lordfell Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
You spelt "familiar" wrong, but otherwise it's great! You're a great inspiration to me and my future comic that may or may not come out. ^^
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tallix Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student Artist
i prefered the old page oft his one- it was ore visiually intersting to me- though I do like how you;ve made the characters colouring stand out a bit more against the darkneed background instead of muting them like in the other pafe.

but at the same tie there is simpley not enough ruric on this page :F

also the top image of the owl doesnt appear to be shaded? or is shaded very very very lightly?
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DawnFrost Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
The next page has more Ruric don't worry X] and yeah I'm not too thrilled with this page either but I need it to break up some of the dialogue from the next page and show the owl looking over the camp.

Next page is better and tells more about Ruric and his personality/background.
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tallix Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Student Artist
*air punch* HELL TO THE YES. *ruric parties* friggin love the guy :') slash in response to your pollcause im too lazy to go to
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wolfgirlbbalover Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Good :) though, you need some anatomy practice on the owl ^^; Birds (including owls) usually have 12 tail feathers. And the gray on his wings- well, sometimes (not most of the time) Barn owls dont have gray there. Even if they did, it would be a dark gray (a sort of dark brown almost) like here:[link]
and these are what most barn owl wings look like
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(i dont want to sound harsh, but the wing anatomy itself just- needs a bit more of improvement :))
other then that, your Barn owl looks amazing! better then i could draw anyways XD
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AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
epic!
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Tephra76 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I would suggest blurring the scenery beyond the owl in that first panel. Not so much that the animal army would be indistinguishable from one another, but enough to indicate distance.

Neat page, though!

Is Mallic someone we already know?
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DawnFrost Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Mallac is the same coyote -only new design- as the other prologue page that this is replacing. He wont play an extremely long role, but he's important to letting ppl know more abou Ruric in the next page and another scene that will be showing up near the end of the prologue.

I will defiantly try blurring the background. Didn't even think about that, thanks =]
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Tephra76 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)

I can't wait for more pages!
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UnrelatedTalents Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Very nice! However, shouldn't the leopard say familiar instead of familier?
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Sladin5Ever Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The canine--no idea if that's a wolf or a different species--doing the mid-scratch is adorable looking :love: And in the first panel, the wolf with it's head up and somewhat glowing eyes is looking right at you when you look at him XD I think that's awesome
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AngelMC18 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like a lot this Jaguar. its really beatiful :love:
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n-oodle Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
wow beautiful backgrounds :D I also love your shading style here! :)
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Riversun Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
epic
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StePandy Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Wow!! I love the colors and style of drawing. It 's a great job! :)
<3
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doglate Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
I thought I already read this page...
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DawnFrost Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
unless you know me in real life than no. This is an revamp page tho so you have seen the poses of Ruric and Mallic. Tho Mallic has been given a new design and the words are slightly different
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doglate Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Ah... :D
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Mirage-Fox Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Yay, moar. :dummy: Very nice~
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