Lotn pg V

[link] <- previous

Lots of Dialogue in this page. Pretty much just giving some background on Ruric (who is in leopard form here) and somewhat explaining why a lot of his pack mates/leader dislikes him and why he's always put in charge of the lower ranked warriors instead of doing real warrior work further in the story.

Fairly proud of this one even if it didn't take me that long. I think 3 days total, but the days were extremely far apart.

Helpful critiques and comments are welcome as always.

Used this tut for the stars and it worked really well so I thought I'd share =] [link]

I also really tried to keep this layout tut in mind when sketching this up. [link] hopefully it helped, with pages like this with a bunch of text and things going on I know it can be hard to follow sometimes.


btw I do know that the markings on Ruric don't match up on the previous page, That page (IV) is still being worked on, I just wanted to pose it so I could really work on this page (V) since this is the one i'm more excited about

Went back and made the changes I said I would, if you guys see anything else just let me know